Competition success!

How wonderful it is to finally win a writing competition! Entering a writing competition is like buying a lottery ticket. You know the chances of winning are very small, and that if you saved all the money you spend on entering them you could probably live off the interest (slight exaggeration), but you can’t help thinking that maybe this time will be the time you do win. And I did! I won third prize in the “Claire Apps: Creative writing for all” competition in November 2010 with my short story “The Castle”.

You can read “The Castle” on the website “http://writing-experiment.webs.com, under “Competition Nov 2010 results” and “Short stories”.

http://writing-experiment.webs.com/competitionnov2010results.htm

The theme was domestic violence, which is obviously a difficult subject, so I wrote the story like a modern-day fairy tale (hence the castle in the title). As a writer, you want to make your readers understand what living in a violent situation is like, but more than that, you also want to make them feel what it’s like. However, you don’t want your readers to feel battered by your words, or for reading your story to be a stressful experience. And you also don’t want to be too melodramatic either, or the writing won’t ring true. I was aware of the need to downplay the violence itself, even though violence is melodramatic; living with domestic violence is living in a constant melodrama.

The word limit was only 1,000 words, which is a very small space in which to set a scene, make something happen and have some kind of resolution. I adapted the story from part of my first novel, which because it’s unpublished and took a long time to write, feels like a mammoth waste of time. However, it was good endurance training for writing my current novel, Nights in Paris, which I’m still young or naïve enough to hope will be a success.

There’s a song about love in the fabulous film Cabaret, set in 1931 Berlin, that could also apply to entering writing competitions. Liza Minnelli, astonishing and gorgeous in the role of Sally Bowles, sums it up perfectly: “Maybe this time I’ll be lucky, maybe this time I’ll win. Not a loser anymore, like the last time and the time before.”

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“Colette” — review of the film

The 1985 two-part French film “Colette: Les apprentissages” and “Colette: l’âge de femme” (referred to as “Colette” for short) directed by Gérard Poitou-Weber, starring Clémentine Amouroux (wonderful name!) as the young Colette, the stunning and astoundingly Colette-like Macha Méril as the mature Colette, and Jean-Pierre Bisson as Willy, has aged much better than the more recent “Becoming Colette”, reviewed in my last post. The narrative — beginning, as all films about Colette seem to do, when she met Willy — is well researched, and compares well to Colette biographies. Some of the dialogue echoes feelings she expressed in novels or letters, which makes the film even more true to life.

“Becoming Colette” portrays Polaire as being both Willy’s and Colette’s lover. In contrast, in “Colette”, their relationship with Polaire is platonic. In “Colette”, her first female lover is Natalie Barney, instigated by Natalie at Willy’s request. In this film though, it’s not clear why this would benefit or excite Willy, as he is not present. [A minor gripe: Natalie was American, and the actor playing her should have had an American accent.] There are strong feelings as to the truth of the Colette-Natalie rumour, on either side. I like to believe Judith Thurman, who in her brilliant biography “Secrets of the Flesh”, says that Natalie counted Colette as one of “her ‘half’, rather than her ‘full’ conquests” (p.139). (According to Thurman, Natalie was Colette’s second female lover: her first was Georgie Raoul-Duval, an American nine years her senior, who was also Willy’s lover at the same time (p.125).)

Where “Colette” excels is in its depiction of the relationship between Colette and Missy / Max. Their love is portrayed as a “real” relationship, not merely a meaningless affair or as Colette experimenting, as some biographers claim. The depiction of Missy / Max is almost perfect — that is, almost as I imagine her — a maternally protective and indulgent person who lived in drag, except more feminine than photographs show, and with long dark hair (the real Missy / Max had very short blonde hair). They are happy for several years, and act on stage together. That scene is wonderful, with the gold “Egyptian” set, Colette being told off by the director for being naked under her mummy shroud, the scandalized crowds going wild when the women kiss on stage, and Missy / Max’s husband the Marquis in the audience, demanding that she return home at once. Then Colette falls in love with Henri de Jouvenel, and Missy / Max graciously bows out of the picture.

The best things about this film are Macha Méril as the older Colette, the depiction of Colette’s relationship with Missy / Max and that, thank goodness, there is no billowing chiffon during the love scenes. This is the best film about Colette I’ve seen so far.

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